My Reflection:
I was learning to compare two events when writing.
I found it hard to think about what I wanted to write.
I found it easy to make sure that all my sentences were punctuated properly.
I want to work on making my writing more interesting.
2 comments:
Mack your week of bike skill and rugby skills sounded like so much fun. I can see you really enjoying the Zombie attack. Great story Mack I really enjoyed reading it. Love Nana
Well done Mack, it is great to see you starting to use paragraphs. Make sure you are not starting your sentences with words like 'what', see if you can think of a better way to start them.
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